Which one is True?
Pontificating October 1st, 2007I walked into the store. My former co-worker greeted me solemnly: “I guess you were right.” We both looked at each other for a second. A piece of cardboard still covered the hole in the glass store front window the perpetrators had created. The man was still bit fidgety and it was noticeable to everyone including himself. I felt bad. I could not recall how many times I told him and the rest of the employees that worked there to reconcile the revenues of the store in the store’s backroom and to turn off all of the lights as they did it. I had even worked extra hours so that there could always be two people scheduled to close each night. Still no one listened to me. Everyone continued to reconcile all of the store’s monies at the large desk in front of the store. Someone always left a half hour to a hour early before closing. “I have other things to do” was always the excuse. Well, now they had been robbed. Not burgled. Robbed. At gun point. And I had long since transfered to another store. I still felt bad, so here I was. This encounter would make for a depressingly interesting night.
Oh, those were the days. During the first summer of my family’s second move to California that took place right before the start of my sophomore year of high school, my life continued at a very enjoyable pace. I remet a lot of friends who, much to my surprise, still lived in California. I also met a lot of new ones. The most memorable part of the summer were all of the times that all of us, new and old friends alike, spent listening to music in one of my new friends’ garage. This friend loved Tupac Shakur and swore that he was still alive. He danced just like him, rapped just like him, and knew everything about him. Being a music fan with other interests in the rap genre, he had a lot of great music, too. Not quite as much as my friend who’s dad was a DJ, but a lot. Some afternoons, all of us would end up gathering in his garage where we would listen to music. Our favorite song was a rap off of Bone Thus-N-Harmony’s Art of War album. We all called it the “gun song.” I still do not quite have a good handle on what the song’s name actually is, but it was fairly catchy to all of us. The chorus had the cocking and firing of a pistol as part of its melody. It is one of those songs that you can only like as a teenager. We would usually sit around and talk. The friend who was a Tupac fan and his little brother would usually brag about having some friend who was a gang member or a past sexual conquest. Our group was a mix of boys and girls which is what always made it interesting. I definitely had a lot of fun hanging out with that crowd that summer.
October 3rd, 2007 at 10:46 am
HMMMM you’re good Justin. So here’s what I have to say – I would have liked for there to be names included in both stories. In particular the first story is missing what kind of store, how long exactly you’d been not working there, and overall personal touch. That makes me think that it is the false one because it is dramatic and I hope that this didn’t actually happen. The second story needs names and a few more details too [for my liking]. The fact that you wrote each in the same style is helpful to keep secret which is made up. I am rambling now –
so my guess is that the first one is false because I want to hope that bad things like that don’t happen that often AND – i dont understand how the hole in the glass happened – I guess im just a detail fiend and want more. So yea thats all.
October 3rd, 2007 at 12:26 pm
What can I say? I only had a paragraph to tell each story. These things happen all of the time. Although do not worry, most theft is pepetrated by the employees themselves. I believe the FBI statistic is between 95-98%. The hole was from a rock or something that was thrown at the window–I still haven’t figuared out how it happened. The hole was right next to an unused front door that was still left from when the space where the store was located housed two stores. And of course, this response does not indicate or infer or have any other relation to the validity of either of the two paragraphs to which these comments have been addressed. Yeah, that is weird that you say that. I haven’t believed in that line of reasoning in a number of years now.
October 3rd, 2007 at 11:35 pm
Oh wow these are hard to pick from. I can see how both of them could be true but I think I am going to go with the robbery one as being true. I would like to think that it did not happen very often but working in a bank for about 10 years made me realize just how often robberys occur.
Mary Beth
October 4th, 2007 at 11:46 am
So the first one sounds more like a story to me. But I’ve also had job experience where money is counted in a visible area (which I always thought was a bad idea). I think the second is more like an account. The second sounds very real with all the names of people, songs, etc. However, for the sake of being skeptical, I’m going to say the first one is true.
October 4th, 2007 at 9:31 pm
I just want to let you know that “the gun song” is called thug love.
October 4th, 2007 at 10:38 pm
Ok, I’m gonna go that I believe the story at gun point. I’m sure the second one was true but just different things are changed around and some facts are exaggerated. This is a hard one too.
October 5th, 2007 at 4:44 am
Thanks Tommy!
October 6th, 2007 at 7:42 am
I think that the first story is the truth. You have a lot of detail in the story, more so than you and your friends hanging out in CA. Hope I’m right.
October 8th, 2007 at 8:16 am
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